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Seeking
the Best Books
By Douglas Talley
In one of the happiest commandments
ever offered humanity God said: [Y]ea,
seek ye out of the best books words of wisdom; seek learning,
even by study and also by faith. (Doctrine & Covenants
88:118). What lover
of books does not relish this invitation? If the gospel required nothing else but obedience
to this one commandment, a great many readers would have secured
election to the celestial kingdom already. Who
knows, even a few literary critics would probably find a place!
One of the ways to seek out the
best books is to apply a simple rule: the
best books contain the best lines. The
Argentine poet, Jorge Luis Borges, once noted:
After all these years I have observed that beauty, like happiness,
is frequent. A day
does not pass when we are not, for an instant, in paradise. There is no poet, however mediocre, who has not written the best
line in literature, but also the most miserable ones. Beauty is not the privilege of a few illustrious names. It would be rare if this book did not contain
one single secret line worthy of staying with you to the end. (From Los Conjurados, translated by
Willis Barnstone in Selected Poems of Jorge Luis Borges, Penguin Books, 2000).
Stone Spirits and the Nativity

The book of poems, Stone Spirits,
by Susan Elizabeth Howe makes for happy reading, because not
only has Sister Howe conceived a good number of lines “worthy
of staying with the reader until the end”, she has conceived
whole poems with that quality. And whatever “miserable lines” might be lurking
in her consciousness like any other poet’s, she has by and
large managed to excise from this lovely little volume.
Sister Howe is an associate professor
in creative writing at Brigham Young University. She completed her Ph.D. in English and creative
writing at the University of Denver and has published poems
in the The New Yorker, Southwest Review, Prairie Schooner, and
other journals. The following, printed in whole with Sister
Howe’s permission, is the finest Nativity poem I have ever
read:
Mary Keeps
All These Things
I stir the innkeeper’s
sympathy
only when my water breaks and runs
down my leg, soaking my blue
robe, and I have to lean
against his shabby door;
he looks at me through splintered eyes.
I have come down from the donkey
in the great bell of my body,
the weight of the child
and him kicking
inside, so the next guardian of those gates
that open only to money, much
more money than Joseph can pay,
will have to see me, my travail.
My accident is not a cheat but the urgency
of birth, and I am not ashamed. He
considers,
refusing my eyes. Beard
stained with mutton
grease, he finally says, “Stables. In
the back,”
and jerks his head to shunt us to one side.
The cave of the animals is dark
and warm, smelling of straw, urine,
dung. Our rushes give off only a smoky light. As
we walk
between the pens, our donkey follows
under his pack, then another brays;
disturbed, the sheep baa.
Joseph worries for me as he cleans
a stall, spreads fresh straw
and a blanket where I can lie.
I am big and awkward as a camel sinking
down. What a relief, to give myself
to pain, guessing the hours these knots
will come and go. Between
them
I feel straw prickling my hair
and ears, scratching the back of my neck.
Then my body clenches, legs
and back and belly tight.
Each cramp I feel the pain can grow
no more, O Lord, no more. And
yet
I have given my word and will
to bring this child. My
body
opens and opens its passage between
my womb’s constraint and the chaotic
clash of life. I will,
in my extremity,
remember I have a name. Mary
is
my name. I will split
open, part
the shadow that keeps this child
from light. He must
come, is coming,
comes. At last, his brash infant cry.
I watch Joseph clean him, bring him
to my arms. I am seized
by his perfection – tiny hands, clear
unblinking eyes. This
dove, this calf,
this young and wondrous lamb squeals
as I take him to my breast.
Tiny gums grip my nipple; he sucks
and sucks, butting me with his insistent
head. When the liquid comes
into his hungry mouth, we are joined
in ache and pleasure – circle and dance;
I give him comfort and he gives it back.
Our small animal noises belong here
in the shelter of the poor and dumb
who break their bodies to sustain
life. I have saved clean wool
from the underbellies of the lambs,
carded it, and spun the softest
cloth to keep him warm. Tonight
he will sleep above us, in a manger
of sweet hay, and we will lie down,
our faces low upon the ground, hands
joined, sheltered in the shadow
of this small and brilliant life.
The Christmas story, repeated so often in the gospel of Luke,
has for many readers become mere fable. Perhaps
the English poet Thomas Hardy captured the remote faintness
of the story best in the poem, “The Oxen”
If someone said on Christmas Eve,
“Come; see the oxen kneel,
I should go with him in the gloom,
Hoping it might be so.
(Selected
Poems of Thomas Hardy, The Macmillan Company, 1966)
The Hardy poem is deservedly anthologized as one of the finest
Nativity poems in the English language. It
skillfully frames the modern skeptic’s dilemma in wanting to
believe, if only to recover the charm of childhood.
Poetry That Makes It Real
So how much better is the poem that
actually succeeds in making the story real? How much more does it deserve to be anthologized? And how ironic is it, that “Mary Keeps All
These Things” is one of the few poems in Stone Spirits that
did not find placement even in a literary journal, let alone
an anthology?
Consider the details Sister Howe
collects to make the story real. Mary’s
water “breaks and runs down [her] leg, soaking [her] blue robe”. The innkeeper has a “beard stained with mutton
grease”. The stable
smells of “straw, urine, dung”. Mary
can feel “straw prickling [her] hair and ears, scratching the
back of [her] neck”. The baby is born with a “brash infant cry”. The poem conjures the reality of the birth
so well because it focuses on those details that are earthen
and vivid.
But these details, earthen as they
may be, are skillfully woven to transcend the earthly and to
capture the celestial wonderment of birth in general, and of
the Nativity in particular. When
Joseph brings the newborn to Mary’s arms, she is, like any
mother of a healthy child, “seized by his perfection – tiny
hands, clear unblinking eyes”. However, the “perfection” Mary sees in her child is more than the
common statement of health and wholeness. We
know it as a prelude, a maternal premonition, of the singular
perfection her child would possess throughout his life. This same spirit of prophecy continues when
Mary calls her child a “dove”, a “calf”, a “young and wondrous
lamb,” each of these metaphors alluding to animals offered
in Jewish ritual sacrifices, as her child also would one day
be offered. So in another
prophetic allusion, this time to the broken body of her child
on a cross, Mary notes that the “small animal noises” she and
her child make while nursing belong in the “shelter of the
poor and dumb who break their bodies to sustain life.”
The bittersweet ironies of these
innocent maternal observations crescendo into a final, overwhelming
reverence for the glory of the newborn. I
simply do not tire of the poem’s final lines. They
remained with me as I read through the entire volume, and will
probably remain with me through my entire life:
Tonight
he will
sleep above us, in a manger
of sweet
hay, and we will lie down,
our faces
low upon the ground, hands
joined,
sheltered in the shadow
of this
small and brilliant life.”
Thomas Hardy in referring to the
Nativity noted “So fair a fancy few would weave / In these
years!” Grown out of childhood and belief himself,
Hardy yearned to join believers at the stable and see oxen
kneeling to the Christ child. Sister
Howe, through a quiet, understated faith, actually leads us
there. The inclusive pronoun, “we”, draws all of us into the mystery. The implicit fellowship between author and
reader causes us to join hands with her, as she herself joins
hands with Mary and Joseph, and brings all “our faces low upon
the ground” to find shelter “in the shadow of this small and
brilliant life.” How sweet and pleasant and spellbinding is the reverence she induces! I
hold these lines among the best literature has to offer.
Howe's Original Mind
I could cite other entire poems
in Stone Spirits worthy of the same examination and
praise. The wonderfully daffy title “In the Cemetery,
Studying Embryos” sets up another sublime gospel truth – the
reality of the resurrection – again related in a pleasing,
modest understatement. I do not want to betray the delight waiting
in the final lines of the poem, but a single metaphor provides
a sufficient teaser:
Perhaps
the first womb
that surrounds
us is spongy
and dark
as the loam
where we
finally sleep . . . .
These lines reflect one of several
gifts Sister Howe displays throughout her work, a gift for
uncommon and unusual associations, which may be just another
way of saying she has an original mind. Who
goes to a cemetery and sees in the skeleton lying below ground
a living fetus? Such an association stretches imagination beyond belief, and yet
Sister Howe not only suspends the reader’s disbelief, with
a few additional tricks by sleight-of-hand as it were, she
may even persuade the skeptic by the end of the poem to consider
the possibility of the resurrection.
The following are just a few more
of the interesting associations found in Stone Spirits:
“we study darkness
To learn
metaphors for light.”
“We say darkness grows
Or gathers, as if
it were a crop,”
“Few things are less personal
Than how
the land needs you,
Saliva,
blood, bile.”
“Passage
through the night is a thrust into absence,
The pull
of emptiness ahead, the risk
I’ll throw
myself at darkness once
Too often,
and finally it will catch,”
Vivid Metaphor
Another poetic gift displayed throughout Stone
Spirits is a gift for vivid metaphor. The poems are worth reading just to chance
upon a few gems like these: the
explosions of fireworks are “glittering pink chrysanthemums,
red green silver peonies, weeping willows of gold”; chickadees
have “diamond hearts primed to spark”; a mist laden morning
lake is “the holy circle”, a “great silver bowl to wash” in. These
metaphors are fresh and compelling without being forced or
contrived.
Finally, the poetic gift in Stone
Spirits, which I prize above all others, is its quality
in a handful of poems to deepen my faith by affirmation,
as found in the prayer-like nature of “Mountain Psalm”:
Is a form of worship: we accept
Someone
else’s version of the way up;
We trust
and follow.
“Father, Mother, give us distance
Through
which to see our lives.”
It is relatively easy in modern
literature to find poetry that deepens the faith of a Latter-day
Saint by challenging it. The
gates leading to that experience are wide and many, and while
such poetry can nonetheless be beautiful and useful, how much
more refreshed I feel when a poet like Sister Howe deepens
my faith by affirming it. And
in truth, I wonder if this is not the poet’s more difficult
task, to affirm belief without slipping into the clichés of
a dry and stale worship, like an uninspired testimony.
If I sound enthusiastic about Stone
Spirits, I am. A
critic should not have to be clever about such things. Barely
a poem exists in this slender volume without one or two lines
of real staying power. What
is more, only a rare reader could search this book without
finding several whole poems worth keeping an entire lifetime. If
there are faults in Sister Howe’s book, I am too dazzled
by its strengths to notice or to care.
Look for an interview with Susan
Elizabeth Howe in a future Meridian column. As
always, submissions from Meridian’s readership are encouraged. If my response to submissions seems slow,
I apologize but the press of daily affairs has left me with
a huge backlog. I promise to reply.
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Doug Talley
graduated with a Bachelor of Fine Arts in Creative Writing from
Bowling Green State University in 1976. Upon graduation he spent
the summer in the Grand Tetons looking for God, which led him on
a hitch-hiking spree to Salt Lake City. He joined the Church and
thereafter served in the Italy, Rome Mission from 1978 to 1980.
After his mission he enrolled in the University of Akron School
of Law. He graduated in 1984 and has "fiddled at the law"
ever since, currently as the CEO of Millennial Assurance Services,
Inc. He has published one book of poetry, The Angel Voice of
Irony, a sonnet sequence about his conversion. A second book
of poetry, April in October, is planned for publication in
2003. His poems have appeared in The American Scholar, Midwest
Poetry Review, Piedmont Literary Review, Hellas,
and other journals. He and his wife and seven children live in Akron,
Ohio, where he has served in every ward calling from scoutmaster
to bishop.
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